Day: December 27, 2014

persuasive essay coursework

I agree with the article by Isabelle Kerr ‘Twerking, selfie and unlike? Young people don’t speak like that –I should know’ as slang is just a fashionable trend which constantly changes and adapts. An example of this is the word ‘groovy’ a slang word that was used in the 1960s which has fallen out of fashion as time went on.

I personally believe that there is nothing wrong with slang, but like Isabelle Kerr I believe that slang has no place in the Oxford Dictionary. I believe this because, firstly, it is not an accurate representation of all young people, not all of us are obsessed with our image, reputation and with sex, like the slang words included in the dictionary would suggested. Secondly, the words could fall out of trend and would then become obsolete. I believe that the Oxford Dictionary should only include slang words which have stood the test of time, and therefore they have become part of the general idiolect. This would allow obsolete slang words like ‘groovy’ to live only in the memory of the generation who used it and not hold back the evolution of the English language.

You would not say ‘init’, ‘JK’ or ‘LOL’ in a job interview, as people want to make a good impression to a potential employer. However if the Oxford Dictionary included these words before they have been accepted by society as a whole, it would make the interviewee seem illiterate. However this person may be a valuable asset to the company, but as they cannot express themselves to all audiences they lose the chance to make a difference to the company and stand out from the crowd. This would cause a generation whose ideas and contributions may never be heard, as slang has not become a part of everyday language. Also many young people only speak slang to their friends and not to figures of authority who they respect and trust. Slang is a form of jargon between youths and their friends and if the oxford dictionary included some of these words before they are integrated in the English language.

It could also be argued that Shakespeare was the greatest inventor of slang as he created hundreds of new words like ‘sanctimonious’ and ‘assassination’, for his plays. At first these words were unfamiliar, causing people to condemn them. But over time these words have become accepted and have earned a place in the English language. It took generations using these words before society as a whole accepted them, and I believe the same will eventually happen to slang. But unlike Shakespeare, my generations is not creating imaginative new words to further our understanding of the world, it is just shortening perfectly good words.

Seriously there is really no need to shorten ‘seriously’ to ‘Srsly’, if you are going to revolutionise the English language at least be original and not alter the already eloquent English language.

Overview of Frankenstein and Tempest essay

Thesis statement society turned both Caliban and Frankenstein’s monster into monsters through rejection and oppression.

Overview

Intro: state thesis and explain how it will be explored

Para1 compare how society made them monsters include context on rejection of new ways of thinking and slavery use connotations

Para2 compare how monstrous they became because of their oppressor. Include context on how the church oppressed science and how slaves were oppressed, use metaphors

Para3 compare how they were both rejected by the fatherly figure.  Caliban being mistreated by Prospero and the monster by Frankenstein, use sematic field to cover language and context.

Para4 compare how both their one chance of acceptance was lost. De lacy for Frankenstein and Trinculo and Stephano for Caliban, use pathetic fallacy to cover language and context.

Para5 compare the power of both the monster and Caliban have. How this effect’s their dealings with the world and events in each of their texts. Use connotations of words to show their status in the relevant text.

Para6 compare how both endings are left opening with the monster intending to commit suicide and Caliban left alone on the island use connotations and perfect felicity.

Con round up of points and finish any lose statements

Key moments

Frankenstein: killing of William, killing of Elizabeth, final chapter, chapter 4 volume 1 and all of the monsters narrative.

Tempest: first appearance of Caliban, last appearance of Caliban, act 2 scene 2

Key quotes

Frankenstein: ‘I wandered like an evil spirit, for I had committed deeds of mischief beyond description horrible’, ‘I shall be with you on your wedding night’, “Slave, I before reasoned with you, but you have proved yourself unworthy of my condescension. Remember that I have power; you believe yourself miserable, but I can make you so wretched that the light of day will be hateful to you. You are my creator, but I am your master; obey!”, ‘hellish triumph’, ‘I have sworn eternal revenge’

Tempest: ‘I must eat my diner […] the rest o’ the island, ‘thou didst prevent me’, I must obey his art is of such power’, ‘and seek for grace’, ‘and yet I needs must curse’